My first story in a long while- influenced by Forsythes- A grand design- A great story-
Let me know what you think, thus far.
A Grand Design
By Adobeman 10
The Blue Rivers ball was the prestige event of the small town of Hickory. Many of the old students from the high schools and even some of the local home schooled children all attended it once a year as adults. It was a sort of town reunion for everyone as it was a chance for all those near and far to come together and reminisce about the old times and for some of the grades and classes to mix together again. Most everyone was happy and joyous at these events. Well…. Most Everyone….
“Hello Gina,” Maria said through gritted teeth as she saw her former high school adversary looking stunning in her sheer Black dress with slit on the side. Her long tan legs flawlessly extending to the floor through the lithe fabric.
Gina Metapolis was a Greek beauty that constantly competed against Maria in high school for all of her boyfriends and Prom queen and head cheerleader and anything else that they could go against each other. Gina came from a family of great means and wealth and had no problem showing it off at every occasion. They owned the local factories, mines, and government. They were rumored to have ties in organized crime which is why they had originally come to Hickory to avoid mob retaliation in the larger cities. It didn’t take long for them to be involved in all aspects of the small town. Gina was the prized gem of the family, gorgeous and smart as a whip. In addition to her vast family fortune, she had long legs and naturally curly black hair, perfect olive colored skin and towered over Maria at a height of 5’9. She was the co-captain of the cheerleading squad and everyone deferred to her except for one.
Maria’s family had come undocumented from the Dominican Republic and she was on the much shorter side. Measuring in at a miniscule 4’7, over a foot shorter than her rival. She was peppy and sweet, but could be downright Catty at times. She was the antithesis of Gina- a counter to Gina’s control over everyone else. She was the top of the pyramid in cheerleading as the other co-captain. She was very poor and her mother had left her father to raise her as a single father and all alone as a poor maintenance man at the Metapolis families local factory. Unfortunately due to his undocumented status he was unable to ever rise above his position and had to use coyote’s paperwork to get by on what little he could do. He was a good man, and a hardworking man and it crushed Maria when he passed away shortly after her graduation from a heart attack.
Maria was blessed with natural E-cup breasts something that Gina did not have naturally topping out at a large A-cup in high school. Miniscule compared with Maria- a fact that Maria loved to hammer home with her low cut blouses and dresses. At such a diminutive height, her boobs looked to cover half of her frame with their massiveness. Maria’s natural curves though went a long way with the boys in High School though and attracted the Star Forward of the Basketball team Ryan Smith. Something that never sat well with Gina who always thought Maria went after him because she was interested in him.
“Maria, I almost didn’t see you down there.” Gina said cattily.
Maria smiled as she pulled Ryan alongside her. “You remember my boyfriend… I’m sorry, I should say ‘husband’ now; Ryan.”
The normally unflappable Gina paused for a moment while she smiled at Ryan. “You look wonderful tonight Ryan.”
Ryan smiled with his perfect Ken doll looks and his 6’3 height over both women. “Thank you Gina, you look great as well”.
The pleasantries and niceties were superficial at best- but Maria reveled the entire time seeing Gina’s jealous face over her buxom chest and her handsome husband. She may have had money, but she couldn’t have Ryan.
“Well you can take this job and shove it!” Maria yelled as she tossed her name badge to the floor and exited the crafts store. She had worked a whole month there, which by her standards was the longest she had been at a job in a while. Unfortunately her attitude with authority got her into trouble yet again when she told off her boss after being over an hour late. Unfortunately due to her undocumented status she had never really been able to get higher jobs or higher education; at least that is what she told herself. In reality she was actually quite lazy and had been able to skate through high school by openly flirting and mixing with Boys and getting others to do her homework, cheat, and skirt her way by any means necessary. She was a direct contradiction to her fathers hard work ethic by cutting corners and doing anything to just barely get by. Relying mostly on the hard work of others to provide for her.
This job was just another one in a long line of menial jobs that she had gotten to placate Ryan and show him that she was ‘doing her best’ while he was doing 80 hours a week in drilling operations often taking him far from home for extended periods of time. Maria found herself coincendently getting fired at those times and used the downtime to shop from home and eat freely while watching tv.
After she turned 21 and hadn’t worked out in a while, she began to notice a little bit of weight gain. In her mind she thought about eating less and possibly working out more, but did neither while adding a bit more weight. As with everything else, Maria immediately tried to find the easy way out.
“I hate the way my thighs look,” Maria said as she posed in front of the mirror in just her panties and bra. There was a slight bit of fat on her thighs, though less than the average woman-just more noticeable given her height. “I want to get surgery and have them get all this fat off.”
“Really? I still don’t see why you need to get liposuction, you are positively beautiful.” Ryan said as he continually tried to talk his wife out of surgery. He loved her all natural figure and was opposed to surgery on a personal and financial position.
Maria crawled on the bed seductively towards her husband trying to convince him to sway her way. “Honey, you don’t understand what it’s like seeing Gina all toned, I’ve tried to work out and I can’t seem to shed any of the weight at all. I need this, please?”
As she crawled on the bed with her heavy Double E cups swaying back and forth underneath her. Ryan realized that there was no way that he was going to deny his wife what she wanted. “well I don’t know. We barely can make rent as it is, surgery is very expensive.”
“Well, what if I can convince you?” she said coyly.
Within moments Maria had mounted the now naked Ryan and began to ride his dick like a dime-store pony. She moved back and forth making sure to thrust her large Double E cups in his face with each motion. She knew he was a breast man, and she made sure to keep putting those giant tits in his face to wear him down. On her small frame, her Double E’s looked twice the size they would on a woman of normal height. At only 4’7, they looked like she was smuggling basketballs underneath her shirt most of the time.
Ryan’s eyes curled back as he got lost in the deep canyons of Maria’s impressive Cleavage-she could’ve asked for anything at that point-all he could say was. “Yes!!!!!”
The very next day, Maria wasted no time in signing up to get the lipo done-eager to have it healed and looking good for summer bikini weather. The costs was something she wasn’t anticipating though as she and Ryan had very limited funds between her not working and him taking the long jobs in Deep sea mining on rigs for weeks at a time.
She was overjoyed when they quoted a lower price, but it meant that she had to be willing to accept a cancellation at a moment’s notice- Maria didn’t care. She was getting her surgery! She could’ve danced to the moon when they called just two days later-saying they had a cancellation.
“I hate that I have to be out of town while you are getting surgery, can’t you postpone it?” Ryan said as he was packing his suitcase.
“The only reason we are getting it as cheap as we are is because I’m taking a last minute cancellation. Otherwise it would be almost three times as much.” She said as she grabbed her husbands out of town toiletries.
“Maybe I shouldn’t go on this job, if something happens I won’t even know- the drilling site is in the middle of nowhere.”
Maria knew that these jobs were few and far between given her husbands line of profession as a deep sea driller. “No, you go-we need the money dear.” She went over and gave him a deep hard kiss. “And when you get back, you will have a hot skinny wife with big Juggs that you can motorboat all day long when you return.”
Ryan smiled, he was a breast man at heart and the thought of burying his face in those mountains was something that kept him smiling for those long month jobs.
The day of the surgery Maria was very nervous; she had checked in with the nurse and had arranged for an Uber to take her home after as Ryan was out of town again on business. She had changed out of her loose fitting t-shirt as it was just a very loose fitting nightie as specified into her paper gown. She was taken aback a bit as the nurse came in and towered over the diminutive woman. Without her high heels on and just barefoot she was nearly a full foot and a half shorter than the tall nurse.
Nurse Lisa smiled seeing Maria’s discomfort and proceeded to do the paperwork for surgery. Marked as Liposuction around her butt and stomach area. She requested Maria disrobe for the measurements. Lisa towered over the woman and felt quite happy seeing her in discomfort over their different positions. This was going to be fun, she thought. Lisa realized that Maria didn’t even recognize her from her high school days; having grown over a foot since high school, exchanging glasses for contacts, and dying her mousy brown hair blonde. A girl like Maria wouldn’t have given Lisa the time of day then, now she found herself oddly jealous of the blonde girls height.
Maria did and felt slightly embarrassed standing nude before the taller nurse but then realized that it was her job and this was needed.
“Ok We have waist at 34, Hips at 38 and Butt at… 42.” The nurse repeated them to Maria who assured they were correct. “I will also need your bust size as well and height and weight.” She then proceeded to measure Maria’s prodigious breasts. “Wow, 44 inches-I bet you have a very happy boyfriend. Ok, please step on the scale and we can measure your height and weight.”
Maria blushed a little bit at the nurse’s compliments over her breasts and shuddered a bit as the cool metal was beneath her bare feet. She made sure to stand at complete attention to get her height just right.
“Ok, I have weight at 110 and Height at 4 foot 6”. She said as she jotted down the numbers.
“Um, can you make sure? I was 4’7 on my last checkup.” Maria hated to lose an inch considering her already sensitive nature about her height.
The nurse rechecked and Maria made sure to stand up as straight as possible. “Nope, definitely 4’6 and you are just barely at that, some scales might even have you at the 4’5 height. Its okay, these things can sometimes vary from office to office and people can fluctuate a bit as they grow older too.”
Maria didn’t like it, she hated when tall people lorded their height over her. She was accused of having a Napoleon Complex about her height and arguing even trivial things over her ‘short temper’. She wanted this surgery done and over and to be back home, skinny, buxom and hot.
Maria lied on her back looking up at the very sharp operating room lights. No matter how much she mentally prepared herself for this, actually going to sleep was an all together different story.
“Ok, now Im going to have you count backwards from 100 as I administer the Anesthesia.” The masked doctor said as Maria’s eyes grew heavy at even 100 and barely made it to 98. “Wow, that was quick-are you sure you didn’t give her too much?” He asked the Anesthesiologist.
“No, given it’s a 5 hour procedure; its enough to keep her down for the initial start and through the surgery.” He responded back.
“5 Hours… The doctor said as he looked at the monitor for the instructions. ‘Complete Breast reduction and nipple shrinkage’. Hmmm, for some reason I thought this was a Liposuction.” He looked down and removed the covering and a very large chest for the breast removal. “Haven’t done a full mastectomy like this for a long time. Shame though, so young too; they never realize that they don’t grow back after this no matter how much weight they gain either. Oh Well, lets proceed.”
Maria’s eyes slowly opened as she looked up and saw the ceiling of the hospital room. Wasn’t she supposed to go home in the rideshare she booked with the hospital service. She tried to move, but her body was so sore. She expected to be sore, but not this sore. Her arms and chest felt so pained.
The nurse came in and turned on the lights. “How are we doing, you’ve been out for so long-unfortunately the surgery took longer than expected so the doctor thought it would be best that we have you stay here overnight as your charts say there is no one home to take care of you.”
Maria sighed; she hated hospitals and didn’t enjoy the idea of staying here any longer than needed. “I need to go to the bathroom please.”
“Ok, let’s get you up then, you will need a bit of help walking.” She said as she went over and pulled back the covers from Maria.
At that moment Maria shrieked! As the covers were pulled back, she looked down to see her chest completely covered in bandages and her once magnificent breasts were gone!! She reached her hands to her chest to confirm that this wasn’t a nightmare and immediately winced in pain!
“Ma’am, this is a hospital; we can’t have you scream like that.” She said as she lifted Maria to sit up straight.
“My Breasts!!! They’re gone!” She was panicking as she still couldn’t believe her eyes.
“Yes Ma’am, the doctor did a great job-complete mastectomy. You had a lot up top and it took longer for the reconstruction than he had estimated.” Nurse Lisa said, as she directed Maria’s legs over the side of the bed.
“But… But… I was here for a liposuction! This is a huge mistake!” She said to the now annoyed nurse.
“No Ma’am, here is your chart and your signature. No liposuction scheduled at all.”
“No no! This isn’t right! My boobs shouldn’t be gone! I…I…” Maria was beginning to hyperventilate and the nurse began to become concerned. She didn’t need her getting an anxiety attack so soon after surgery.
As Maria kept pressing her chest and pulling at the bandages, Lisa reacted quickly before she could tear stitches or worse and injected her with a sedative. Maria collapsed like a log in her bed within as second of it hitting her system. The nurse called the doctor in and explained what happened.
“Hmmm…. It sounds like dis-associative cognition, the patient wanted surgery and is suddenly surprised at the change in appearance different from expectations or previous imagery.” He deduced.
“You should’ve seen her, perhaps it was a mix-up in patients scheduling or…” The nurse tried to offer explanations. “But, here is her signature and consent clear as day”
“If it was a mix-up in scheduling or if there was a paperwork error-then where would the error lie? Not with the surgeon, it would be the nurses’ station and exactly how would you explain that error to our malpractice insurance?” The doctor looked at the nurse with grave insinuations.
The nurse paused and reflected on the doctors words. “Its definitely what you said, she signed the forms. This is her signature and that is what she asked for.”
“Very good, I knew you would see it correctly given perspective.” He said as he took the chart and went over it. “Perhaps it would be better if we admitted her for the next week, at least until she heals up. If she is released, she’s more likely to go home and hurt herself and cause worse damage. I can go back in after a day or so and laser sculpt and remove some of the scar tissue-try and make it as perfect as possible. A patient with no scars and a finished project is generally a patient with no issues and less likely to be litigious. Or if they do become litigious, we at least have signed documentation as well as a perfect finished product.”
“What should I do with her then?” the nurse asked.
“Keep her sedated… Its for her own good, I will have Dr. Simmons from Psych write up a recommendation for sedating her based on her actions after surgery. We should only have her about a week. Notify her Emergency contact that she is staying in the resort recovery ‘for celebrities’ and she is re-cooperating there from surgery. That should tide them over until we are ready to release her.”
Nurse Lisa followed the doctors instructions to the letter. Maria was kept sedated and put on a catheter and intravenous feeding. She would gain a little weight with the high protein injections, but it would better help with the healing process. Every once in a while she would begin to stir to which the nurses station would increase the dosage putting her back into a tranquil sleep. In-between days she was wheeled into surgery where Doctor Dobe would continue his cleanup work of the mastectomy. Laser removal of scar tissue, medical lax injections to remove any bruising or discoloration, and all previous indications of larger boobs stretching or anything else was surgically removed and laser etched to remove scarring.
The final procedure was a full body skin peel, this was to better blend the surgical area with the rest of the body’s skin tone to remove any blemishes and lines and anything else that might make it look different than the rest of her. Her Latina body would no longer be as dark, but would be a much lighter shade.
Doctor Dobe looked over his patient on the table quite proud of his work. If no one knew her before, they would’ve sworn that she was flat-chested her entire life. All lines and marks and even old scars from her body had been removed with the peel and laser treatment, and even her now much tinier nipples and areola were lighter than before. It was expensive and time consuming, but it was much cheaper than a lawsuit. She would have a hard time convincing anyone of anything otherwise. She had gained a bit of weight from the intravenous feedings, but the peel even removed any stretch lines or anything else. She didn’t even have any lines on her face. He was quite proud of that, he would have to use that laser treatment for some of his older patients as it made quite a difference on her, better than botox and took years off of her appearance. Well, take some pictures for the before and after and close the file; any guff from the patient would result in all the documentation shown to show everything was done ‘As Requested’.
“Time to wake up,” Nurse Lisa said as she slowly began to roust Maria from her sleep. She had cut off her Sedatives several hours ago and it was time to wake up.
“What happened, I had the worst nightmare that…” Maria looked down and saw the bandages over her chest and began to scream before the nurse cut her off.
“We can’t have you scream again, otherwise security will have to come speak to you.” She said calmly but forcefully. “Now we are all done and ready to discharge you from the hospital.”
“But I didn’t want this! I” Maria began to panic as before.
“Ma’am, you did and here are the forms and the procedures signed by you. Now unless you want security and a psych doctor to come visit you. I would caution that if you cannot control yourself, they may have to place a 5150 hold on you. Now can you compose yourself?”
Maria knew what a 5150 was, she saw her neighbor years ago go crazy and the police came and put her in a psych ward and when she was released a year later all she did was drool and barely remember anything from before. In addition to her legal status and Ryan, she couldn’t cause any more trouble. She simply nodded to the nurse’s request.
“Good, now let’s stand you up and get the forms filled out and bandages removed so that you can go home, okay?”
Maria simply nodded as the nurse assisted her up and swung her feet to the side of the hospital bed. She didn’t have anywhere near the pain that she had before and was able to manage to her feet from the bed, though a little more wobblier than before to which the nurse assisted her.
“Ok, let’s get these bandages off so we can see the final work.” The nurse said as Maria was transfixed and watching her as she slowly unraveled the bandages from around her torso. She felt like she was staring at a car wreck, she knew it would be bad, but she also couldn’t look away. As the last bandage was removed, the nurse smiled. “Well, I must say the doctor did a spectacular job; there is no scarring whatsoever.”
She was right, Maria though In horror, there was not a single scar of what was there previously. She began hyperventilating again as she stared at her chest in shock! She wanted to scream but all that came out were gasps. She was flat! For the first time since she was a grade schooler she had nothing on her chest. Her magnificent Natural E-cups were no more, instead she saw tiny little nipples smaller than ever on a barren chest bone going straight into a small little stomach that actually stood out farther from her body than her now tiny nipples.
“The doctor did a magnificent job; I have rarely seen reductions come out this clean before. You are very lucky.”
‘Lucky’?! Thought Maria. She had beautiful Breasts before, breasts that were the envy of every woman. Now she had a chest smaller than a prepubescent boy!
“Let’s get the final measurements for your exit forms. Please come over here and stand on the scale.”
Maria did so reluctantly and wobbled a bit as her legs were still weak from being in bed so long. The nurse escorted her to the scale for a familiar procedure. Except this time she was able to see her tiny little feet on the metal scale without her boobs obscuring them anymore…
“Ok we have waist at 36, Hips at 40 and Butt at… 44.” The nurse repeated them to Maria who remembered different numbers, but couldn’t remember them exactly from before as she was still muddled. “Ok and your weight… 120 and Height 4 foot 5.”
“Wait! That can’t be right.” Maria paused to correct her. “Can you check that again?”
“Ok… Yes you are right. Weight 122, must’ve been all that hospital food right?” She smiled as she corrected the number.
“No… No, that seems wrong, but my height? It’s supposed to be 4 foot 6.” She protested even after she had protested about the 4’7 before-she settled to say 4’6.
“I’m sorry; I have you at 4’5 just above the 4’4 mark. Its okay, we have a lot of ‘little people’ come into here before. I have a patient who is only about 4’2 –just a little shorter than you.” The nurse said as she continued to fill out the form.
Maria was stunned; she had never been called a ‘little person’ before. She had always wore heels and platforms and stood straight to avoid looking smaller than she was and with certain heels she was able to get close to 5 feet even. Her smallest measurement before was 4’7 and she was even able to fudge her driver’s license to say 4’9. At 4’5 it was a whole new level reduced of height!
“Well I am going to take this to the counter and get your discharge papers filled out and then the hospital will call you a ride to take you home. Your clothes are over there on the counter and you can get dressed now; you won’t need those bandages anymore.” She smiled as she exited the room and closed the door behind her leaving a stunned and confused Maria behind.
Maria slowly stepped off the scale and confirmed it just for her satisfaction. ‘ 4’5 and 122 pounds? Had she shrunk AND gained weight? Even with no boobs?’ Maria thought. In the corner there was a full length mirror by the door and she managed to walk over there careful not to lose her balance.
Her mouth was agape as she saw her reflection… Her entire body looked different! Even with the now lack of any chest development whatsoever, her entire skin tone was different. She was very proud of her skin as a Latina woman, but while still Hispanic, she looked several shades lighter of brown to an almost light tan now. She looked at her face and was shaken by the difference. Her skin was lighter and smooth, almost no discoloration whatsoever like a small doll! She didn’t even have any lines around her eyes or smile, like any years had been erased. Looking down at the rest of herself she had to squeeze her stomach to assure herself it was real. It was like she had gained all this extra weight in her stomach and her thighs and butt-the exact thing that she came here to get reduced! Her arms shook a bit with a little extra and her body quivered a bit as she shuddered touching her sensitive nipples. She touched her nipples again and felt herself tingle as she was consumed with sexual pleasure, more than twice what she ever felt before with her larger boobs. She moved her hand down to her smooth pussy and… Smooth?
She looked down at her crotch and to her stunned surprise; it was entirely smooth to the touch! Like she had laser hair removal. She did wince a bit as it was super sensitive to her touch. She got a little wet, before she composed herself and quickly put her underwear back on. She was aroused ever so quickly by just the slightest touch. She had brought a loose fitting T-shirt pink t-shirt with a Daisy Duck on it that she had worn to bed many nights to wear home per the surgery’s instructions. As she pulled it over her head, she was dismayed that it came just above her ankles instead of her knees. ‘had she shrunk?’ That’s impossible she thought, but given how things had gotten screwed up before she was very concerned. It must have extra slack from her lack of boobs.
She grabbed her purse and made her way to the nurse’s station to check out. She was visibly annoyed that the nurse’s station counter was at the bottom of her chin. “Excuse me please, I need to check out.”
The nurse looked up from her paperwork at Maria, “I’m sorry dear, we need an adult to check you out, is your mother or father here?” She said earnestly.
“What? IM an adult! My name is Maria-Rivera Smith. I just had the surgery that you assholes fucked up!” She said very angry. How dare they call her a child after they fucked up her surgery.
“Yes ma’am, it appears we have a car waiting for your pickup in the entry area. We have your travel bag outside as well.”
“Thank you for nothing!” Maria said as she ripped the paperwork out of the nurses hands and huffed and puffed as she exited the hospital in loose fitting Daisy Duck T-Shirt and her tiny little sandals.
Lisa stood completely satisfied with the end results of seeing the arrogant Maria brought down a few pegs. The fact that she was paid handsomely for her cooperation was only icing on the cake.