I posted this story on another site 5y ago, i decided to publish here to take advantage of the rev I did recently, 5 years ago my english was terrible, I hope it has improved a bit.
So far it has 6 parts, as the revs progress, I will publish more chapters
All feedback is welcome, hope you enjoy.
[reality alteration, wishing device, humil, scat(only on the last part)]
This recap is in reference to another story that I hope to publish soon.
Quick-recap
An archeologist finds a place, where it was said, there was gold, a a thief woman seduces him, steals his map, kills him and heads for the excavation site. She steals the gold, sells it to a jeweler, realizes that gold can grant wishes and is trapped and is punished by the entity that owns the gold, the gold that she managed to sell was used to make different jewelry.
Chapter 1
Marco was a tall boy, brown eyes and black hair, he was leaving his job and headed for the jewelry that was in the center of the city.
He'd been looking for an engagement ring for two months to propose to his girlfriend Cindy, this was difficult for him since he did not make much money, but the love he felt for her was big enough for him to do anything to make her happy.
This led him to search every jewelry for a ring that was good enough and cheap.
He found a jewelry store that looked promising, once on the spot he saw a girl behind the counter, she was beautiful, brown hair, green eyes, she had a white blouse adjusted by her large breasts, at least C cup, and a black skirt that reached her knees.
"Good morning, I looking for the most beautiful ring you have" - He said kindly without even asking the prices.
The girl assumed that he had enough money to be determined to buy any ring without asking the prices, so she agreed to show him the special merchandise.
Marco had only $550, it was the money he had saved over the past 6 months.
He had been working double turns and covering shifts to earn a extra money, since he wanted the most beautiful ring he could find.
She went to the back room and after 5 minutes she came out with a black box in her hands, put it in the cabinet.
"These rings just arrived, they are of very good quality, choose the one you like most" - she displayed the open box.
Marco saw between the various jewels, a ring among several that had, had a golden glow, a glitter he had never seen before and a small yellow stone fastened with 4 silver posts, something told him that he had to take that, it was special.
"I'll take this" - He told her showing the ring in his fingers.
The girl had his doubts, he had chosen the most expensive ring they had, so she decided to let him know the price.
"That ring costs $8,000, are you sure?" The girl asked.
Marco's eyes widened in surprise as the girl told him the price of the ring. He did not expect a ring cost so much. He knew he could'nt buy it, even though he knew the ring was the right one.
"I wish it cost $550, that's all I got." He sighed and reached out his arm with the ring on his fingers to her.
"Okay, it'll be $550, pay with card or cash," she said cheerfully.
Marco frowned, doubting what the girl had just said. He thought he was playing and followed the game, even though he could not buy it.
"Haha, you're very funny, please cash" - Said while leaving the ring on the counter "
The girl took the ring, went to the cash register, typed some things and then looked at Marco.
"It's $550, please."
Marco saw that the joke had gone too far and she had charged him a cheaper ring.
"No, miss, I want the diamond ring" he clarified.
"It's the one I'm selling you, sir, will you take it or not?" - She nodded.
"No, miss, I only have $550." He responded, thinking he was mocking at not having enough money.
"Here it is, sir" - the girl indicated with the index finger the screen.
-> "Gold ring with poles of silver and yellow diamond -> $550"
Marco did not know what to say, she was charging him much less than what she had told him, so he took advantage, it was probably a mistake in the system. He took the money from his wallet, gave it to to her, she typed some more things in the register, printed a ticket, put the ring in a black box, then in a bag with the jewelry logo and handed it to Marco.
"Thank you for your preference, have a very good day" - She said with a smile on his face.
Marco did not know how to react, it's like he's stealing. He took the bag, left the place, and headed for the bus stop.
To get to his house he had to cross half a city, and as it was rush hour there was a lot of traffic, while waiting for the bus, he opened the jewelry bag to look again at the ring he had just bought, then a woman sat down at his side to wait for the bus.
She was a 22yo woman with dark hair, light eyes, a little smaller than him, a small waist, a skirt that reached her knees and kept a small but firm butt and huge breasts at least a cup- D, he had in his hands the sack that had been removed by the heat that made and you could see between the buttons of the shirt the bra that held those large breasts, she was falling asleep, it seemed that she comes from a long and heavy day.
Marco could not help but see such attributes, he tried to conceal it so as not to disturb the girl and he would judge him as a creep.
The bus arrived, they both went up, they paid for their boarding and they looked for a place to sit, it was a bus of seats that look at each other, she sat in the middle of the bus, right in front of her was the last free seat, so he sat there, from that angle He could see her more easily without her noticing that he was looking at her.
The bus began to move, she leaned her head on the seat and fell asleep.
Marco could not help but watch her breasts move because of the movement of the bus, it was a pleasure to see her neckline. He still had the ring in his hands, when he saw it, reminded his girlfriend, "well, seeing other girls on the bus is not cheating:)" - he thought, with a smile on his face returned the look to the girl.
"I wish he did not wear a bra, it would be so hot," he thought as he watched her.
Just then he watched as the girl's breasts loosened on his shirt, his nipples were clearly visible through his shirt, and with the movement they moved slightly from left to right, up and down.
Marco's eyes widened in surprise, how she could take off his bra without him noticing, as he had even thought to take it off the bus, something was happening, but he was very distracted by the sight he had. He could easily notice that they were barely steady, size and gravity were already doing their job, "Wow, if they were flabby, it would really be a sight" - he thought.
In that instant, he could saw how her large breasts lost firmness, the bus, still moving, made them move shamelessly, they moved like jelly, her nipples stood out even more through the fabric, they looked like breasts of a 35yo mom.
In that moment Marco realized that, strangely, the things he thought came true, but, all his life he thought many things and had never happened something like this, something had changed.
He began to analyze what he had done that day, to get up, to bathe, to have breakfast, to say goodbye to his girlfriend, to go to work until 6 o'clock, everything was the same routine.
"The ring!!"
He noticed the shine of the ring was the same as when he first saw it. "It must be the ring, there is no doubt" - he said to himself.
He had to make sure it was the cause, so he set the task to confirm it.
He held the ring tightly, looked at the girl in the eye and said in his mind:
"I wish that she was dressed in denim shorts and a tank top"
As if by magic, his clothes changed instantly, he now had those shorts and tank top he had imagined. He turned to his sides, trying to see if anyone else had noticed, but they were all too distracted or asleep for the day's work.
Marco spent the rest of the trip thinking about ideas to keep making things that he wanted to come true, without people noticing. After 1 hour in traffic the bus came to a stop and the girl woke up. Marco analyzed the way the girl would react to see if she was aware of the changes.
First she got up quickly, yawning and headed for the bus door to get off, and when she looked down to see the stairs let out a scream.
"What happened to my clothes!" Between her hysteria and accelerated breathing, he quickly got off the bus, unable to avoid the rebound of his flaccid breasts. Already at the bus stop she realized that she did not have a bra and that her breasts were incredibly flabby, only her cries of despair were heard as she did not know what had happened. The driver ignored her and kept moving in traffic.
Marco, still surprised, now knew that the changes he made could be perceived.
The bus had reached its destination, got off and headed for his house which was a 10-minute walk.
Already in his house, Marco knew that he had a very powerful object in his hands, many doubts entered his mind.
Can I use it at my convenience? Is it wrong to use it? Are there restrictions? It has a range?
There is only one way to find out, trying.
Marco went quickly to the living room, turned on the tv and searched the news channel where the beautiful girl came out giving the weather, it was 8pm when she was on air.
He knew that many people would be watching, so he had to do something that did not seem suspicious.
The weather girl was very beautiful, light hair, sharp face, blue eyes, nice tits b cup, wasp waist, big and firm back covered by a tiny white skirt, and long and thick legs, a real babe.
"Okay, let's find out what she ate for lunch," he said to himself and held the ring between his fingers.
At that moment the girl noticed in his face some concern, taking his right hand to the stomach tried to cover up his discomfort. A moment later, she let out a loud fart.
The girl's face went completely red with embarrassment, but her professionalism kept her composed and continued to explain the weather.
"Let's see if you can handle this." Marco had a wicked smile on his face, determined to humiliate her.
Just as the girl turned to the screen with the weather information of the week, she let out a groan of discontent in her stomach, as if what she had eaten was struggling to get out. He could not stand it any longer and decided to leave the scene to go quickly to the bathroom, but it was too late, another strong fart came out, but this time accompanied by big turd, all her shit began to fall to the ground between his feet, you could clearly see in her skirt the great brown stain that was leaving. She had closed her eyes of the intense pain she was feeling in her intestines, the flow stopped slowly, when it seemed to be over, a big explosion of shit left her behind an obscene amount of shit, he had never seen so much shit come out of a human being.
The girl fell to the floor between her own shit, crying in pain, at that moment the signal was cut, leaving static on the television.
Marco stared at the TV, still unable to believe the power in his hands.
To be continued…