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div wrote:Hello Kid A!
The scenario is not exactly new except for a few twists. I remember at least two examples which were delivered in style.
Your female protagonist does not seem to suffer badly from stupidity and her character seems quite centered on her looks. Can't realy see how to make it work. Removing the mirrors won't do the trick.
Kind Regards!
div wrote:Hello Kid A!
The scenario is not exactly new except for a few twists. I remember at least two examples which were delivered in style.
Your female protagonist does not seem to suffer badly from stupidity and her character seems quite centered on her looks. Can't realy see how to make it work. Removing the mirrors won't do the trick.
Kind Regards!
blurmy wrote:Well, I for one can't wait to see where you take this interesting and well written start.
You're one of the authors that I always like to check on and never disappoint.
Keep up the great work x
tfrmer wrote:
I think Kid's doing a really good job with this so far, is a very well respected writer and if you don't like the story then don't comment as you spent $0 to read his story as even that Comic Book Guy from the Simpsons who does nothing, but critique and over-analyze stuff at least pays for his content first.
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