Hello!
Sadly my router has choosen this weekend to start passing away. It comes back on at times for a few minutes and then nothing for hours. Somewhere I got a few spare divices but can't remember where to look. So I better get it out now.
I have not read the leatest posts for obvious reasons but loaded them dowm. I am frozen in time so to say at the scene where Jenna and Miles left the Harvest Dance. This is what I wanted to reply yesterday:
Looks like we are back to boring and predictable. Don't get me wrong, the detail is fine and the effort visible. Nice writing. Still its bordering on inconclusive in my opinion. I just can't see a sobered up Jenna play along like that and develop deep feelings for Miles. Neither can I see Miles purposly taking advantage of Jenna's submissive strain. Doesn't work that way. Everything is too tame, the character broken and the storyline spoiled to a degree, but I had it all wrong before at the beginning and got surprised..
Kind regards.