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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby david515 » Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:54 pm

I think this is going to be a great story
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby albert » Fri Feb 12, 2016 3:06 pm

this looks promising
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Chopchop37920 » Sun Feb 14, 2016 4:28 am

I think you should add Angel a boyfriend from Detroit who calls and talks to her while she undergoes her metamorphis which she is totally oblivious to and thinks she is the same beautiful woman then when he gets concerned due to her incoherent state comes to visit and gets a BIG suprise!
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby dagolfer » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:04 am

Hey Bozox, an interesting start, there are so many different directions you could take this story. Looking forward to reading more.
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Moddie » Wed Feb 17, 2016 3:07 am

Great set up! Can't wait to read more.
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Chopchop37920 » Wed Feb 17, 2016 3:47 am

I am hooked! What's next? :twisted:
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Chopchop37920 » Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:41 pm

Can't wait for more please. Really like where this is going. Maybe those kids could go to her home and reek havoc on her tidy home and nice car ect...
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby dagolfer » Sat Feb 20, 2016 12:47 am

This is great! Something weird is affecting poor Angel, will she fall for "Lil" Larry? Perhaps take on some of his attributes - shrink, acne, spray saliva when she talks, or perhaps take on the traits of the other poor inhabitants of this town. Can't wait for part V, V1, V11 and more!
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Moddie » Sun Feb 28, 2016 3:19 am

This is tantalizing! The setup for the transformation is perfect. More please!
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Re: NEW START by Bozox

Postby Chopchop37920 » Sat Mar 05, 2016 12:06 pm

This would make an excellent interactive story since the author has ran outta ideas...
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