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by david515 » Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:54 pm
I think this is going to be a great story
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by albert » Fri Feb 12, 2016 3:06 pm
this looks promising
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by Chopchop37920 » Sun Feb 14, 2016 4:28 am
I think you should add Angel a boyfriend from Detroit who calls and talks to her while she undergoes her metamorphis which she is totally oblivious to and thinks she is the same beautiful woman then when he gets concerned due to her incoherent state comes to visit and gets a BIG suprise!
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by dagolfer » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:04 am
Hey Bozox, an interesting start, there are so many different directions you could take this story. Looking forward to reading more.
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by Moddie » Wed Feb 17, 2016 3:07 am
Great set up! Can't wait to read more.
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by Chopchop37920 » Wed Feb 17, 2016 3:47 am
I am hooked! What's next?
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by Chopchop37920 » Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:41 pm
Can't wait for more please. Really like where this is going. Maybe those kids could go to her home and reek havoc on her tidy home and nice car ect...
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by dagolfer » Sat Feb 20, 2016 12:47 am
This is great! Something weird is affecting poor Angel, will she fall for "Lil" Larry? Perhaps take on some of his attributes - shrink, acne, spray saliva when she talks, or perhaps take on the traits of the other poor inhabitants of this town. Can't wait for part V, V1, V11 and more!
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by Moddie » Sun Feb 28, 2016 3:19 am
This is tantalizing! The setup for the transformation is perfect. More please!
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by Chopchop37920 » Sat Mar 05, 2016 12:06 pm
This would make an excellent interactive story since the author has ran outta ideas...
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