It's a rewrite of an amazing story by Flaming Hades. I might have to format it and put it on the stories side of the site, but here's a link to his blog and deviant art page where it's posted. I know he posts here too and that he'd love some feedback.
The Slowest Champion - Revisited
http://riptoryx.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://riptoryx.tumblr.com