The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

[Matt L.]

Very enjoyable, I sound like a broken record but you have such a prowess for dialogue and detail.
Bravo!

Cheers, Matt

[Junketh71]

This was seriously enjoyable. Thanks for updating!

[kid a]

thanks very much guys - should have more up by the weekend if not sooner.

[Lyssa]

Cool Dude! I like your story very much, Susan seems to be stuck in high school, I mean I imagine that all her preppy friends have moved on and are going to big time colleges, advancing in their lives while she is still at home and working a job meant for high school kids. Also liked how submissive Susan is, Shelly having the attitude Susan had in the beginning of the original story.

[kid a]

Part 4

Back in the kitchen, Susan stomped around in a passive-aggressive hissy fit, still fuming from Chuck and Shelly’s insults. “Who do they think they are,” she muttered under her breath. “That bitch,” she continued, focusing her ire on the Assistant Manager. “If she could have seen me back in the day she never would have dreamed of.....”

With that, she peered down at her bulging belly rolls which were busy eclipsing the view of her Payless brand shoes. Tears welled in her eyes. Who was she kidding..those days were well past long gone.

Her rueful reminiscence was broken momentarily by the sound of Shelly’s voice as she entered the room. “And back here we have the fryer and all the burger supplies,” she commented in a chipper tone to the slender young girl at her side. “Have you ever worked in a restaurant before Shawna?”

Susan watched as the duo walked into the cramped and steamy kitchen. Shawna Parker. She had known that Crystal had a little sister; Shawna actually came up to Burger World quite frequently to see her Big Sis, a few years ago when Crystal was still an employee. But of course that tenure had ended shortly after high-school for her former antagonist.

Shawna was a vision of youthful grace and energy in her purple and green store uniform. “How can anyone make polyester look that good?”, Susan muttered with a huff as she tried to adjust the ill-fitted outfit that encased her own out of shape and blubbery body.

Contemplating her personal life trajectory, Susan sniffled at that thought. She certainly had her share of glory days back in high school, but It all seemed so long ago, not to mention unattainable now. After graduation, even that 60 extra pounds had felt insurmountable, but there had been brief moments of hope when she seemed to be on the verge of turning things around. Yet time and time again a 10 pound loss would evaporate in weeks and bring an extra five back for the party. She was simply too addicted to food to make any permanent progress.

And now sitting at a 100 pound weight gain overall she was, by most estimates, officially morbidly obese. Far past the point of no return. Burger World, while the definition of a toxic work environment, was the ultimate enabler for a burgeoning fatty like Susan.

So she took a long hard gulp of her chocolate shake and stuffed the remaining fries from her meal into her waiting mouth. Munching through the remnants of yet another secretive pig-out session, Susan’s chipmunk cheeks bulged with greasy food as she pouted visibly, preparing to show the latest in an endless string of slim, sexy high schoolers the ropes at Burger World.

[Matt L.]

Quite very fantastic. You have a style and skill compatible to Maverick's, and a genuine prowess to detail especially in describing the buttery female form. The Payless brand shoes gimmick is cute, did daddy cut off her allowance, did she ever completely pay for her dad's car repairs? Extraordinarily well written, chipmunk cheeks, adequately mentioned.

Kudos!


Cheers, Matt

[Junketh71]

Thank you for the new chapter. It was very well written!

[Lyssa]

Hey Dude! Your write your stories so deliciously sweet!

I can't wait to read what happens next!

[kid a]

Thanks all and sorry I’ve been slow.

The good news is that I have a rough draft of the next part in the works - more by early next week.

[kid a]

Part 5

15 minutes later, Shawna stood in the kitchen alone with Susan, receiving a full-on view of her fat ass as she reached up on a shelf to show her where the extra cooking spray was stored. “Oh, my God,” she thought to herself silently as she watched what clearly fell into the “fat pants” category struggle to contain that blubbery rear-end within.

Susan’s sizeable love handles oozed out visibly above her waistband. They jiggled furiously as she simultaneously completed the retrieval of the supplies and attempted to tug her skin-tight purple shirt down over an ever-growing list of “problem areas”. Wiping the sweat from her brow, she reached for a handful of fries from the bin and shoved them into her mouth as she completed her instructions to Burger World’s newest staff member.

“Auhmd be crruurful not to grment the spruuffay too clmrose to the flames,” Susan mumbled as she chewed through a mouthful of the greasy and fattening fries. Noticing the stunned (and disgusted) look on her trainee’s face, she blushed with embarrassment and swallowed quickly, taking another large gulp of her creamy chocolate shake to wash it down.

“Safety is job number one,” Susan finished blandly as Shawna glanced around her new work station. “Think you got all that?”

“Sure thing,” Shawna replied smoothly with a slight grin on her face. She had keenly observed the way Susan’s bosses had treated her earlier, and her new Supervisor’s place in the store pecking order was fairly obvious. So she decided to test the waters a bit.

“So is it REALLY true that you used to be a cheerleader?” she asked in a half-whisper. Stunned by the query, Susan froze for a moment. Collecting herself and attempting to find a more flattering pose, she searched for the right response.

“Captain of the cheerleading squad, if you must ask,” she shot back, attempting to convey an air of authority to her underling. “State champs back-to-back my Sophomore and Junior year of high school.”

A proud look adorned her chubby face for a moment as she finished that thought and day dreamed of her triumphs. But as she looked back at Shawna and saw her snickering, she came quickly crashing back to earth. What were at this point non-stop feelings of self-loathing and personal inadequacy returned; in a now knee-jerk reaction, she grabbed another handful of fries and swallowed her feelings.

“Yeah,” Shawna continued. “Crystal was telling me a while back how hot you used to be before you got so f...”

Seeing the look of shock and anger on Susan’s face, Shawna stopped herself. “I mean before you started working here.”

Shawna smiled nervously as Susan eyed her with open suspicion. She had long wondered if Crystal and Judy had something to do with her weight gain. Clearly no love was lost between Susan and the duo. And in addition to the initial encouragement to partake in Burger World’s unadvisable menu selections, a few other odd things had caught her attention during their time as fast-food co-workers.

The numerous occasions when she noticed them spying on her in the changing room. And that night Crystal was messing with her milk shake, darting off upon detection and leaving a strange ring of chocolate flavored powder around the top edge of the cup. In any event, both she and her stuttering little sycophant Judy had clearly enjoyed the show as Susan’s weight ballooned out of control.

And now here was Crystal’s baby sister; first day on the job and already taking shots at Susan’s now fully cemented weight problem. She scowled as Shawna sauntered away towards the register, shifting her slender hips and thighs in Chuck’s direction as she paused to flirt with him for a moment.

Susan grabbed a double cheeseburger from nearby and took a huge bite. “That little bitch,” she thought as the juice and grease ran down her double chins.

“She doesn’t know what it’s like to be surrounded by all this fattening food 24-7 and...”

A grin spread across her chunky, oily face as she stopped mid-thought. Eyeing her new and slim nemesis from afar, a plan began to develop in her mind. “What goes around, comes around,” she said quietly in a sing-song voice as she munched through the rest of her Burger.

And if she couldn’t lash out at Crystal directly, she would settle on the next best thing.