The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby Junketh71 » Tue Oct 23, 2018 4:54 pm

So, karma?
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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby kid a » Tue Oct 23, 2018 5:36 pm

Junketh71 wrote:So, karma?


Isn’t it always with me? ;)

And that was your 600th post. So....
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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby Matt L. » Wed Oct 24, 2018 12:37 am

Hands down one of the finest epilogues I have ever had the pleasure to read. That's a fitting comeuppance for a damsel who would have never shopped at Walmart back when she was the popular eye candy vixen, designer fashions let alone a much more rewarding career are out of reach for young Miss Singleton. I can imagine Susan rubbing elbows with the typical white trash patrons.

Nice that you included Crystal and Judy into the mix, and college babes, that alone would have ruffled Susan's nerves and blistered what was left if any self-esteem.


Bravo!

Cheers, Matt
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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby kid a » Wed Oct 24, 2018 3:14 am

Thanks Matt - hopefully this brought it all full circle

It’s funny - it occurs to me that often I “end” my stories when it’s still going to take the epilogue to provide full resolution of everything. Sometimes that is by design, other times just how my brain accidentally works.

But anyways, you were right, Shamyboi ;) I’ve said this before but I really don’t mind the criticism. Sure, I unloaded on one person (*upside down grin*) but that’s not usually how I react. I’m very much learning how to write and I get a lot of value from constructive, realistic criticism.

Thanks all for continuing to read and comment.
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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby Lyssa » Sat Mar 02, 2019 9:25 pm

Very cool conclusion! :D beauty queen to huge cow stories are the best! :D

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Re: The Lesson 2 - By Kid A (XWG, Revenge)

Postby TheGreatestView » Sat Apr 16, 2022 10:48 pm

Love your work Kid A!
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