Matt L. wrote:A legitimate classic, well-written, short but sweet. The Shamu remark was cute.
I only wonder how Stacy will acknowledge Gloria now that she is an official fatty.
I sincerely hope you'll continue writing, you my friend have a real talent and a definite feel for the genre.
Cheers, Matt
Thanks very much - and you nailed it...short but sweet.
I like leaving it hanging like that. Although it’s not really “hanging”...in a sense it’s resolved IMHO. Not trying to exaggerate how good I am (maybe someday I’ll learn proper punctuation and do this on something other than my iPhone) but I equate it to a musician who makes use of “space” versus trying to cram in constant lyrics and notes one after the other.
And for sure. I’m just getting started.