Pinch an Inch - By Kid A (XWG, Magic)

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Re: Pinch an Inch - By Kid A (XWG, Magic)

Postby Matt L. » Thu Mar 01, 2018 9:52 pm

A legitimate classic, well-written, short but sweet. The Shamu remark was cute.
I only wonder how Stacy will acknowledge Gloria now that she is an official fatty.
I sincerely hope you'll continue writing, you my friend have a real talent and a definite feel for the genre.

Cheers, Matt
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Re: Pinch an Inch - By Kid A (XWG, Magic)

Postby kid a » Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:20 am

Matt L. wrote:A legitimate classic, well-written, short but sweet. The Shamu remark was cute.
I only wonder how Stacy will acknowledge Gloria now that she is an official fatty.
I sincerely hope you'll continue writing, you my friend have a real talent and a definite feel for the genre.

Cheers, Matt


Thanks very much - and you nailed it...short but sweet.

I like leaving it hanging like that. Although it’s not really “hanging”...in a sense it’s resolved IMHO. Not trying to exaggerate how good I am (maybe someday I’ll learn proper punctuation and do this on something other than my iPhone) but I equate it to a musician who makes use of “space” versus trying to cram in constant lyrics and notes one after the other.

And for sure. I’m just getting started.
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Re: Pinch an Inch - By Kid A (XWG, Magic)

Postby dev111 » Fri Mar 02, 2018 8:54 am

Great writing once again!
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Re: Pinch an Inch - By Kid A (XWG, Magic)

Postby kid a » Fri Mar 02, 2018 10:26 am

dev111 wrote:Great writing once again!


tyvm. Glad you enjoyed it.
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