by catfish » Thu May 23, 2013 9:23 pm
Haven't been here in a while; glad I (finally) noticed the interactive story feature.
While making my first contribution, I noticed two typos: "Parrent Episode" (should be "Parent"), and "Make sure to have a visable line break between paragraphs" (should be "visible").
Edited to add: Also, didn't manage to cut-and-paste the full text correctly, but on the "final review" page is a "you're" that should be "your" (a different one than what Cinnamon Twist noticed above) as well as "booking keeping" (should be "bookkeeping").