FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby brightsun21 » Mon Jun 20, 2016 1:18 pm

Love all the new chapters
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby Matt L. » Mon Jun 20, 2016 3:05 pm

Hello Brightsun21,

Thank you, happy you enjoyed them.

Cheers, Matt
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby cane4kaa » Wed Jun 22, 2016 10:47 am

CooL story!!!
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby Matt L. » Thu Jun 23, 2016 12:21 am

Hello Cane4kaa,

Thank you, there's more to come.

Cheers, Matt
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby div » Thu Jun 23, 2016 3:20 am

Another post, another turn, the protagonist getting shit faced in front of the guys seemingly for no other reason than lack of attention, a new character with potential enters, an omnious proposition right at the end..

You manage to keep me interested.

Kind regards!
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby Junketh71 » Sun Jun 26, 2016 5:14 pm

I really love the new chapters!
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby TheGreatestView » Mon Jul 04, 2016 10:24 am

You're both brilliant Matt and Her Revenge! When will the next chapter come out? Fantastic story!
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby DELIMAN092262 » Mon Jul 04, 2016 1:36 pm

Have you thought of adding a twist? Instead of just having Jenna going deeper into the abyss. What if she finds out what is really going? What if she finds out there is a cabal of people trying to destroy her? What if Jenna must “appear” to be going along while she plots her revenge? What if she decides the “cost” is worth getting her revenge?
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby her revenge » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:03 am

Interesting, very interesting...
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Re: FAT FRIEND BY MATT L & HER REVENGE

Postby dagolfer » Tue Jul 05, 2016 1:23 am

and what if poor Jenna got in to "deep" and couldn't get out when she did try? Struggling to speak correctly, her dress sense is shot and her mannerisms are very much like the poor souls from the wrong side of the tracks.
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