Well written Matt. Easy and fluent to read. You reach the end before you know and then comes the waiting for the next story.
I like this story although I used to think and still mostly do that stories of this type work best with a little more malicious intent in them, carefully garnished with submissiveness or domination or personality change.. whatever seems fit. Sinister or wicked enough they had to be or turn boring they will. Right?
On Fantasy Feeder there is an author named FoodieChef who is quite inventive with sinister and wicked but sadly enough did not seem capable to finish a single story properly at least none of those that appeal to me. Could be the other way around though. May be I am too stupid to realize that they are complete. I would appreciate a second opinion. Teasing him or her a bit to continue didn't work at all.
Keep going!