by Rockn316 » Sun Jun 11, 2017 6:21 pm
Rats, damn interpretative styling lol. Either way I enjoyed it and I didn't see it as racist myself. Stereotypes are that for a reason enough people do them to where its generally safe to assume one does it. Granted there is always going to be people who don't but that's a irrelevant topic to the conversation lol. In these genres you have to express things and that's the best way to do it, I feel. Besides if your looking for PC in these stories I really don't know why your here. I had figured it was a dark passion of the newly created Rachel to have a emasculated cat feed her, at least that's where I thought it was going. Either way I leave the writing to the writer as always for if I could do better I would, but then I wouldn't enjoy it because I did it and wouldn't ever get the "well where is this going??? fee"l. I'm just glad it hit one kink then something I find humorous which is foreign accents. Wasn't a fan of the Sissy boy thing but that's me and sadly not all these are just for me haha. Great twist non the less as I was expecting it to favor I forget his name, but and excited to see it play out for sure! I wont suggest anything though, leave the skill to the skilled! So glad to see new chapters or plot twists show up. I only like personally 5 if at all of those interactive stories, and hated how most just stop. Glad someone is continuing at least one I enjoyed. Nailed the hell out of the first chapter for me. very unique I thought of a WG, seeing how with that TF one can only spin it so much. again can't ait to see where it goes!