Become What They Hate Identity Death Story Commission

[udonis38]

So I was messing with an AI writer and couldn't get what IO wanted wrote. I have the good basics of the story just need someone to write it for me. I will pay for their time and work. Its an identity death kind of story. No matter what I could do it would not write a bad ending to the story and lacked on descriptions. AI is really bad at writing smut LOL. In the end I wanted them to hate the kind of people they once were so they have fully become what they hated before. But AI was impossible at that.


Here is the synopsis:
In a grand sorority house in a wealthy suburb, five young women gather for a ritual that will change their lives forever. As they chant and dance around a glowing crystal, a strange force envelops them. Suddenly, they wake up in new bodies and lives, each one completely different from the last. They are magically compelled to act as who they are now and start to develop a hatred for who they used to be.

The former leader, now named Veronica, wakes up as a mousy, shy geek with braces and no curves. She loves all things nerdy and struggles to adapt to her new life as an outcast. As she looks in the mirror, she can't help but feel disgusted by her new appearance and longs to be her old self again.

The athletic one, now named Maria, is now a short, chubby Latina with a thick accent and lazy demeanor. She finds it difficult to adjust to her new body and lifestyle, especially since she used to take pride in her athleticism. She feels ashamed of her new appearance and avoids looking in mirrors whenever possible.

The former slut, now named Faith, is forced into the life of a devout religious girl with a very conservative mindset. She struggles to reconcile her new beliefs with her old habits, and feels trapped in her new life. She misses the freedom she used to have and hates the person she has become.

The former Christian, now named Raven, is a loud, vulgar punk girl with tattoos and piercings. She dons a slutty goth fashion sense and faces ridicule for her appearance. She is horrified by the person she has become and longs to go back to her old life.

The former high society rich girl, now named Daisy Mae, is a chubby redneck girl with a deep southern drawl and a low-class demeanor. She has no grace or poise and struggles to adapt to her new surroundings. She is ashamed of her new appearance and longs to be the person she used to be.

At first, the girls are horrified by their new selves. They struggle to adapt to their new lives, which are often filled with hardship and ridicule. They forget their old names and are compelled to only answer to their new names.

As they search for a solution, the girls begin to realize that their old selves were not as perfect as they once thought. They come to understand that true beauty lies within, and that kindness and compassion are more important than looks or popularity.

In the end, the girls decide not to break the curse as they have become who they once hated. They show a deep hatred for who they once were and fully embrace their new lives.

Here is the character list:
Veronica (formerly the leader): A mousy, shy geek with braces and no curves. She wakes up in a small, cluttered room filled with comic books and action figures. She now lives in a quiet town where everyone knows each other and struggles to adapt to her new life as an outcast. Mr. Johnson, a kind-hearted elderly man, takes her under his wing and shows her the beauty of small town life.

Maria (formerly the athletic one): A short, chubby Latina with a thick accent who wakes up in a small, rundown apartment with her extended family. She finds it difficult to adjust to her new body and lifestyle, especially since she used to take pride in her athleticism. Coach Rodriguez, a tough no-nonsense coach, pushes her to embrace her new body and discover her hidden talents in sports.

Faith (formerly the "slut"): A devout religious girl who wakes up in a small room with a cross on the wall and a bible on the nightstand. She struggles to reconcile her new beliefs with her old habits and feels trapped in her new life. Sister Mary, a wise elderly nun, mentors her in her newfound religious life.

Raven (formerly the Christian girl): A loud, vulgar punk girl with tattoos and piercings who wakes up in the back room of a dirty punk nightclub. She dons a slutty goth fashion sense and faces ridicule for her appearance. Max, a tough tattooed punk rocker, takes an interest in her and helps her navigate her new life with confidence.

Daisy Mae (formerly the high society rich girl): A chubby, redneck girl with a deep southern drawl who wakes up in a small rundown trailer full of cheap furnishings. She has no grace or poise and struggles to adapt to her new surroundings. Bubba, a good-hearted simple country boy, takes a liking to her and teaches her the beauty of a simpler life.

And finally here is an outline, it doesnt have to be fully followed though just kind of a suggestion:
Act 1 - Introduction:

Chapter 1: The Zone of Comfort - Veronica, Maria, Faith, Raven, and Daisy Mae, each in their old lives, live in a grand sorority house in a wealthy suburb. Veronica is the popular leader, Maria is a talented athlete, Faith is known for her promiscuity, Raven is a devout Christian, and Daisy Mae is part of high society. They enjoy their comfortable lives and revel in their popularity and privileged status.

Chapter 2: The Desire - Each girl feels a growing dissatisfaction with their lives and yearns for something more meaningful. Veronica wishes to be taken seriously for her intelligence, Maria desires to be recognized for something other than her athleticism, Faith longs for genuine love and acceptance, Raven craves excitement and freedom from her strict religious upbringing, and Daisy Mae wants to experience a simpler life.

Act 2 - Conflict:

Chapter 3: The Opportunity - One night, the girls gather in the sorority house for a mysterious ritual, hoping it will grant them their desires. As they chant and dance around a glowing crystal, a strange force envelops them, and they all pass out.

Act 3 - Rising Action:

Chapter 5: Veronica's Shock, Struggle, and Adaptation - Veronica wakes up in a quiet town in the body of a shy girl with glasses. She is horrified by her new appearance and struggles to suppress her popularity-driven instincts. As soon as she wakes up, her speech and actions become quiet and shy. She is shocked by her inability to stop acting this way and begins to understand the value of intelligence and genuine friendships.

Chapter 6: Maria's Shock, Struggle, and Adaptation - Maria finds herself in the body of an overweight girl with no athletic ability. She is devastated by her new physique and grapples with her identity as she learns to accept herself. Immediately upon waking up, Maria's speech is peppered with Spanish and she has a thick accent. Her actions become more introspective and less focused on showcasing her physical prowess. She is shocked by her inability to stop acting this way and discovers hidden talents worth exploring.

Chapter 7: Faith's Shock, Struggle, and Adaptation - Faith wakes up in a convent, in the body of a nun-in-training. She is stunned by the contrast between her old and new lives and resists conforming to her new religious surroundings. As soon as she wakes up, Faith's speech becomes very conservative and her actions more tempered and respectful. She is shocked by her inability to stop acting this way and starts to understand the true meaning of love and acceptance.

Chapter 8: Raven's Shock, Struggle, and Adaptation - Raven finds herself in the body of a punk rocker with tattoos and piercings. She is frightened by her new appearance and lifestyle and battles her internal conflict between her old religious beliefs and newfound freedom. Upon waking up, Raven's speech is peppered with curse words and her actions become more assertive and daring. She is shocked by her inability to stop acting this way and learns about the importance of self-expression and confidence.

Chapter 9: Daisy Mae's Shock, Struggle, and Adaptation - Daisy Mae wakes up in a rural town, living in run down trailer with a stereotypical white trash family. She is appalled by her new environment and struggles to adapt to a simpler life. As soon as she wakes up, Daisy Mae's speech takes on an uneducated southern drawl with no class, and her actions become more classless and trashy. She is shocked by her inability to stop acting this way and starts to appreciate the importance of kindness and humility.

Act 4 - Climax and Conclusion:

Chapter 10: The Consequence - As the girls adapt to their new lives, they begin to forget their old identities and develop a hatred for who they used to be. Veronica despises her former shallow popularity, Maria resents her past reliance on athleticism for validation, Faith disdains her old promiscuous habits, Raven abhors her previous strict religious beliefs, and Daisy Mae detests her former snobbish high society lifestyle.

Chapter 11: The New Reality - Each girl faces the decision of whether to break the curse and return to their old lives or remain in their new ones. After reflecting on their experiences and personal growth, they acknowledge that true beauty lies within, and kindness and compassion are more important than looks or popularity.

Chapter 12: The Resolution - The girls decide not to break the curse, fully embracing their new lives and identities. Veronica, Maria, Faith, Raven, and Daisy Mae forge ahead with newfound wisdom and appreciation for their transformed lives, leaving their old selves behind and moving forward with self-acceptance and love.

Epilogue: Embracing Their New Lives - Each girl is shown fully living and embracing their new identities. Veronica, now valuing intelligence and genuine friendships, takes on leadership roles in academic clubs and mentors younger students. Maria uncovers her passion for cooking and becomes a driving force in the local cooking community. Faith dedicates herself to helping others through charitable work and finds true love in a fellow volunteer. Raven starts a band and uses her music to inspire others to express themselves freely. Daisy Mae takes on a job at a local farm stand, cherishing her connections with community members and the simpler life she now leads. The girls' newfound hatred for people like their former selves becomes a driving force for positive change as they work to promote kindness, compassion, and self-acceptance within their communities.