Hey guys,
(Sorry if I don't adhere to common submission practices. I'm new to posting)
Long time reader and first time contributor. I've been a serious writer for as long as I can remember, but for the past four years, I've been suffering from writer's block. Consequently, my writing has gone downhill. So to remedy my situation, I thought I could contribute to a story that I really enjoyed in the past, but without an ending, I have always been disappointed by its potential for being a good short story.
The story I speak of is called 'Special Diet,' by a contributor named Karl. It can be found on the dimensions forum. Just google 'special diet Karl Dimensions forum,' and it will be the first thing to pop up (this site doesn't allow me to post links for some reason.)
It's a weight gain/ weight swap story, and I encourage anyone who enjoys that sort of thing to go read it. I liked it, even if I agree with some of the readers who believe it to be a little implausible. The story is simple and a bit cliched, but Karl does a good job of hitting on what makes a good weight swap story so good. So it's about a personal trainer and a stubborn wealthy over-weight client. The over-weight client can't lose weight from the personal trainer's regimen, so she draws up a contract that states that every pound she loses, Lisa (the personal trainer) must gain two pounds. If she fulfills her contract every two weeks, she gets a thousand dollars (in the story, it's pounds). The motivation for Lisa to gain weight is to fund her potential fitness business, and the motivation for Clara to lose weight is to see Lisa become desperate and try to get fatter. So simple stuff. The story lasts for 10-12 entries finishing with Lisa at a healthy 268 pounds and Clara around 179 pounds. Since the story is unfinished, I decided (without the permission of the author, so call this fan-fiction) to finish the story how I see it concluding. So here is the first chapter. I am strictly doing this for myself, but if anyone enjoyed that story and wants an amateur-ish finish to it, well here you go:
NEW CHAPTER 1
To say that Lisa was suffering from a food coma was an understatement. After eating over eleven pounds of chili dogs in a hotdog eating contest, and on top of the half gallon of icecream she decided to polish off when she got home, Clara found the once perky and bubbly personal trainer now a lump of fat sleeping on her couch on a Saturday afternoon.
Clara noticed how her ass had become so big that as she slept sideways, the blanket was used up covering her ass, leaving only a sliver of cloth for Lisa to tuck underneath her billowy chin. Clara knew that the whole competition really got to Lisa. How she was so angry to have lost to that skinny girl. Clara relished that ironic detail. But Clara also thought it was strange how Lisa was so disconnected with reality. Was she forgetting what she used to be, which was an athletic super fit trainer? Sure, she was gaining weight to get enough money to open a gym, but did she think about where she will be when it's all over? I mean, thought Clara, who's going to join a gym with an owner that's the size of a whale? Let alone an ass that can take up two seats on a plane?
Deep down, Clara took great satisfaction in seeing little Miss Perfect plump up and she would be lying if she said she didn't take pleasure in knowing that this 'momentary' breach in personal fitness wasn't so temporary as Lisa thought it to be. Clara knew what it was like to be fat. Really fat. Fatter than Lisa is now. She knew that habits are hard to break. A serious sweet tooth is hard to break. Even a fully stretched stomach is hard to break. Clara smiled as she heard Lisa let out a massive, wet fart. There's still a thin version of Lisa in that burgeoning fat body. And when she's gone, it will only be you, Fat Lisa....Sleep well....
Throughout the afternoon and into the night, Lisa slept off her gargantuan meal while experiencing a rather vivid dream. In the dream, Lisa saw herself as she was several months ago, before she met Clara and agreed to the contract. She was skinny and muscular with well-defined abs and a shapely ass and modest breasts that fit snugly under a sports bra. She was running in this dream....In a marathon or track meet. It was fuzzy, but could see herself blowing past the other female competitors with ease; muscles twitching; sweat steadily running down her tan skin.
As she rounded the track, she built up a sizeable gap between the other runners. Her breathing was controlled, even calm, but just as she finished making the quarter-turn, she noticed something that was...a bit off. Just a slight displacement of weight, she thought. Small, almost imperceptible to most people, but to a well-built athlete, it almost seemed to nag on Lisa's mind. What was it? Then she felt it squirm and this time...jiggle. She looked down and saw that her stomach was no longer flat, but almost concaved, jutting out past her tight spandex bottoms. She saw a small lip of fat form above her spandex and jiggle violently as she completed her strides. Then she felt it again, but this time, as her heel struck the track, she felt it boil up her thighs and into her ass. As she ran, she no longer felt her glutes contracting and stretch in her tight shorts, she felt two bowls of fat grow and quiver, slap against each other, and then stretch and widen. She looked back and saw her ass had grown so large that her shorts turned into a bikini and both cellulite-ridden cheeks were exposed to people watching her. She felt incredibly embarrassed as she looked at the faces gawking at her. She wanted to quit as she felt swell and threaten to pop out of her form-fitting sports bra, but she was determined to win the race. But then it wasn't just embarrassment she felt, but that of an intense hunger. From her hunger, sprang the images of all the food that was off-limits to her. That of powdered donuts. Chicken wings. Greasy cheese burgers. They all surged in her mind. And as she licked her lips and thought about wolfing down slices of pizza or stuffing her face with chilli cheese fries, Lisa didn't realize that her body was growing fatter and fatter. Soon her thighs undulated and scraped together as she ran. She could feel her ass cheeks growing even more causing her sense of balance to shift closer to the ground. Her breathing became laborious. Sweat poured down her expanding body. Her footsteps slowed, but she could see the finish line. She looked back and saw the sleek women gain on her chubby body. She tried harder, doubling her pace, but this only caused her to gain quicker. Soon her ass, which took the brunt of her fat, became so large that she could no longer make long strides. Her clumsy movement turned into a swinging gait, and then that dwindled down to a slow, pathetic shuffle, as her thighs increased and pushed up against one another. Even though she was now hobbling to the finish line, Lisa noticed that she was close. Just a few more steps, and she would win....All Lisa needed to do was a few more...steps...Lisa breathed heavier...Her belly started to jut outward and her breasts positively exploded from her sports bra, and from the last spurt of weight gain, Lisa lost her balance and fell. She could no longer support herself. She couldn't finish the race.
As she struggled to stand, she saw a team of perfect asses and swift legs fly past her. They all blew past the finish line, but the one who got first place jogged effortlessly back to where Lisa lay doubled-over, huffing and puffing, trying hard to catch her breath. Brushing back her brown hair and smiling, Clara looked down at Lisa and said, 'Enjoying the view, fatty?' When Lisa looked up at Clara, that's when she woke up.
Sometimes dreams are so powerful that they have a disorienting effect on a person. Upon waking, for moments and sometimes even hours, the person is still stuck in that dream, almost not believing what they experienced. For Lisa, she woke up believing that she was still thin, and even thinking that it was just some kind of nightmare. As Lisa opened her eyes, she saw the red alarm clock next to the couch. It read, 4:30 AM. Just the exact time she usually woke up to go for a morning jog. Believing she was unchanged, Lisa threw off the covers with great determination, swung her feet around and....Strange, thought Lisa, I must be more sluggish this morning, as she tried to bring herself to her feet.
When her second attempt failed, she thought to herself that her legs must be asleep. In the darkness, she pinched her doughy thighs and noted how strange they felt. Still, not remembering her recent gain, Lisa tried for a third time to get up by pushing up with her arms. Having succeeded, she went to the bathroom and turned on the light. What stared back at her was a shock. Instead of Lisa the trainer with gorgeous black hair, a beautiful smile and chiseled but delicate features staring at her, it was a fat girl. A fat girl who clearly needed the old Lisa's help because this fat girl still had the remnants of chili cheese dog on the corners of her lips.
Lisa was stunned. She touched her prominent cheeks and pinched the fat collecting below her chin as if it were the first time. Then her hands trailed downward and felt her much larger breasts. She never had large breasts because she was more of a pear-shaped figure. That's why her instagram account was so popular; having a sizeable ass on a thin waist was selling these days, but when she moved down to her butt, and took two handfuls of her soft flesh, she nearly cried. She couldn't feel any muscle. What's worse, when she turned around to get a better view, she could only see one of her large, cottage cheese ass cheeks. They were so big! She turned back around, and took stock of her mid-section. Pushing down on her taut peach-colored underwear was her belly. It wasn't as big as the rest of her and it seemed to be split up into two parts with the smaller band of fat covering her abs (or where her abs used to be), and the lower part jutting out like an inflated lip over her underwear and just above her pubic bone. She looked at her arms. They were thick and beefy. So, too, were her fingers.
There was a scale in the corner of the bathroom. She didn't want to step on it, but she was still in a state of shock. She needed more proof that this was real. She waddled to the metal scale and hopped on it. After a second, and with the help of her hand pushing down her lower belly to get a good view, she read the numbers, 272.
'I am certainly enjoying this view,' Said Clara standing in the doorway of the bathroom.
Lisa jumped, which caused her whole body to jiggle. When she turned, her ass was still shaking. Lisa was red-faced and when she saw Clara standing there, she wanted anything in the world to cover up her fat body.
Seeing Clara standing there in a sports bra and black leggings, with a shirt she was about to cover herself up with, coiled around her neck, and that wicked smile- suddenly Lisa remembered the last scene from her dream. Clara looked less fat. Her thighs were developing a gap between them, and her face was losing its roundness and developing a devilish angular demeanor that made her look more and more like a bitch. Her arms were thinner and even sported some definition. Her biggest problem was her belly, but that too was shrinking at a rate that made Clara proud enough to show off in front of Lisa. Then again, Lisa was the fat one now...
'Move out of the way, fatty.' She said as slinked past Lisa's wide hips, and putting on her tank top. 'It hasn't been two weeks, but let's weigh ourselves anyways.' She stood on the scale and when she saw the numbers, she announced proudly, '177!' she hopped off the scale. 'Even in my sleep I can lose weight now!'
She then grabbed Lisa's ass and jiggled it. 'Doesn't seem like it's doing the same for you. Quite the opposite. Well...' She looked at Lisa and said, 'Are you hungry? Do you want me to make you a shake before I go on my morning jog?'
'No.'
'That's not normal of you.'
'I...I..can't believe you did this to me!' she said on the verge of tears.
'What?' Clara said, nearly laughing. She left the bathroom and went into the adjoining kitchen. She turned on the light and started making a health shake for herself in one blender and a gut-buster for Lisa in the other blender.
Lisa followed her into the kitchen. 'You forced me to gain weight. You knew I needed money and-'
'Honey, you're the one that shoveled all that food in your mouth. You're the one who blew up that ass of yours. You wanted all that money to open up a gym, remember?'
'Yeah, but it was you that forced me to gain weight in the first place! You said you couldn't lose the weight unless I gained, but clearly you don't need me anymore sucking the fat out of you!' Lisa said pointing to Clara's relatively flat stomach. Clara was taller than the average woman, so for her, a hundred and seventy-seven pounds didn't make her look chunky as it would a much shorter girl, like Lisa who was a good four inches shorter than her. Sure, Clara still had a doughy stomach, but peaking through the top portion of her flab was a noticeable set of abdominals, thanks to consistent jogging and cross-fit that she now adored with a passion.
Lisa's point was hard to deflect, and Clara knew it. So she finally realized what I was doing this whole time? Took her long enough.
Clara threw a few carrots into her blender, and a carton of heavy whipping cream in the other. As she let the silence between the two of them last for a little longer, she thought she was finally ready to come clean. For some reason, this wicked little thought delighted her.
'Okay,' she said, 'If you want out of her agreement, then do so.'
'Good-'
'But if you do that, you won't see a single penny from our agreement.'
'What?!' Lisa cried.
Clara chopped up a few apples and threw it into her blender, and dropped three healthy scoops of rocky road ice-cream into the other. 'That's right. The agreement states that you will get your money when the scale reads one hundred and tweny-four.' She said, clearly meaning her weight.
'And what about mine? What does it have to read for me?'
'It doesn't have to read anything from here on out, but that means you get no money to pay for your expensive business venture. Believe me, honey, you aren't any close to opening up a business with what you earned already.'
Lisa was dumbfounded. How could someone be so maniacal? Did she really enjoy seeing Lisa get fatter and fatter? Of course she did, thought Lisa, seeing that smile again.
Clara put the finishing touches on her smoothie with a big twist of kale, and just before she was going to finish Lisa's with a great big scoop of weight gain powder, Clara shot an icy stare at Lisa and asked, 'So what's it going to be? End up fat and wealthy? Or end up just...fat?'
Lisa bit her lip. She knew at this stage in her fattening that even if she resisted, with all the damage she caused to her metabolism and her stomach, she would still gain weight. Whether it was just five or six pounds every two weeks, it would still be gaining, but with Clara's accelerated weight loss, she wouldn't be getting any money out of the deal. She would just be doing what Clara said earlier, which was getting fat and not getting any wealthier. Lisa knew she had gone this far. No pun intended, but she couldn't half-ass it now. If she only gained enough weight to make a few grand every two weeks, then it would be justified, she reasoned. And it wouldn't be too long until Clara would be down to 124 pounds? She's consistently lost 5-8 each weigh-in, thought Lisa. Lisa tried to do the math, but an intense pain shot up from her stomach. Lisa buckled for a second before looking up at Clara grinning-
'That's what happens when you steadily stretch your stomach, honey. You'll get some pretty strong hunger pangs if you do eat every hour. Hard to ignore, huh?'
As the hunger pangs subsided, Lisa was quick to lash out, 'Don't call me, honey!'
'Okay then, FAT ASS. So what will it be?' Clara started the blender with all the fattening ingredients.
Lisa quietly leaned over the counter and grabbed a glass from the drying rack. Defeated, Lisa held the glass up to Clara.
'No, no.' Said Clara as she turned off the blender. She took the pitcher from the machine and handed it to Lisa and with a look of satisfaction, Clara watched as Lisa slurped down her special smoothie, particularly enjoying as some of it ran down her reddening tear-stained cheeks.