Great new parts. Hope there will be more soon. Very nice set up, a lot different from the ar stories I've read, very original and exciting. Still wondering how it would be a F2m ar story but I think time will tell what you have in mind. Though I am perfectly in peace with a F2f story; if fact my favorite genre.rent post
Anyway, is there is a reason your updates don't show on top? I think many would miss the updates if they don't keep track of it. May be you could post them as a different story (number them with parts -1,2,3, ...) and when the story is done, merge them into 1 post or make an ebook.
Thanks for the update. It is only getting better. Hope the future is still saving the best. Good luck.