Love conquers all! (REVISED) WG, BE, IQ, Slut, reality

[Tony26]

I thought both stories were great but couldve had more to it.

[Eidio]

Yes but by that same context many of the stories of fiction branches could be said to have been ripped off and ripped off from one another. Unfortunately with such a nithch market theams are going to commonly recur. It is a somewhat unfortunate truth.

[EFHRJ]

I'd enjoy this story more if the paragraphs were broken up and spaced more so they aren't giant walls that cause the descriptions to get lost.

[colt361]

I really liked your story and I hope to see more in the future!

[colt361]

One thing that I did wish was in the story though is we did not get to see the family picture pay off. We saw the part with the wing eating award and wet t-shirt award but I wanted to see those pics of her at the beach being ridiculous and trashy and the pic where she was the center of her family changing to where it was clear she was an embarrassment. But I still loved the story.

[audipwr87]

Ok, my story has been revised and (hopefully) improved to be more different from Wholesale Changes. I hope you guys like this new version that I typed up. I've been working hard to make it my own. Adding more depth to the Story and characters.

Thank you everyone for the kind words! You guys have no idea how much it means to me and I'm honored to get compliments from some of my favorite authors too!

[Theacds]

Can I get a pogchamp? In the chat? Five stars!! And I'm NOT just sayin' that because I love WG and Bimbo as a transformation. ... Not... entirely, at least.

Good luck in future endeavors, man.

[audipwr87]

Thanks Theacds! I'm really happy with how my revised story turned out. What do you mean by pogchamp? Haha

[Theacds]

I'm a low quality person who watches twitch streams is all it means. Pogchamp just means, like, hype or excitement.

[audipwr87]

Oh haha I used to watch twitch livestreams all the time! Its definitely a good way to pass the time!