'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang - removed to become ebook

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Re: 'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang (dg, prostitute, ident

Postby ErebusNox » Wed May 10, 2017 4:04 pm

I love the story. I just love how Cassie kept changing and changing. The ending was a total curve ball. I expected her to go from county to county whoring until she was back in the UK. Once in the UK I expected her to change Kelly to be like her. I also sort of hoped that Cassie would turn into Cassandra and she would take over Erik's girls, and she would become a female pimp, or for her to get the tattoos she talked about but that's my imagination going crazy. But the German Mistress came out of left field. I loved it, but part of me still wanted her back in the UK whoring and corrupting Kelly.
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Re: 'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang (dg, prostitute, ident

Postby Tang » Fri May 12, 2017 9:20 am

It can be a challenge with transformation fiction to keep people wondering about the outcome, so in part, I am glad I have succeeded in that.

I am always happy for people to write spinoffs or alternate endings to my stories, so if you want to write that outcome instead, feel free to go ahead.

Yes, I did a story some years ago, "Walking Broad Street" in which a female pimp failed to turn a woman but ended up snaring her friend instead. Ultimately the friend takes over being the pimp and finally transforms the original woman into a prostitute. So I was looking for something a little different here.
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Re: 'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang - removed to become eb

Postby ErebusNox » Sun Feb 04, 2018 5:58 am

Oh is available now on e-book or will soon be available?
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Re: 'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang - removed to become eb

Postby bit » Sun Feb 04, 2018 8:41 am

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Re: 'The Bag in the Backroom' by Tang - removed to become eb

Postby ErebusNox » Mon Feb 05, 2018 4:16 pm

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