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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby afguy » Sat Jul 08, 2017 6:18 pm

**KNOCK-KNOCK**
You still around? :?:
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby red_loves6 » Sun Jul 09, 2017 1:24 pm

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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby KyraBenoit » Sun Jul 09, 2017 3:04 pm

I've been to a number of plays and concerts where the audience has been impressed by the performance. I think your stories are more than that impressive. When the audience wants more, they stand and applaud until the artists return for and an encore, or shout until they return. So I'm standing, clapping, and yelling "red_loves6! red_loves6! red_loves6!

Of course, if adulation isn't enough, there is always the bribe for ...
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby Enemyoffun » Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:50 am

My question is if Maggie ever existed in the first place?

Maybe there was only ever Margaret. That perhaps she didn't die and was transformed into a young woman, everyone made to believe she was actually her granddaughter. So its not so much a granddaughter becoming old and pretending to be be her grandmother now but a woman returning to her proper age?

Just an interesting theory to ponder :D
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby pinkhippo99 » Wed Jul 26, 2017 5:12 am

I just wanted to say this is one of my favorite stories. Major props to red_loves6.

I am actually working on something similar right now and I was hoping you guys could help me out. What are Maggie and Doris's current weights? Do you have some kind of reference you are using? It would be helpful if you could give me an idea.
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby estranhosidade » Mon Aug 14, 2017 2:11 am

I just ended up reading your story, it's amazing. I just love how you were able to develop such a deep and profound about theme. I love how the main character just starts to slowly accepting that she's now an old lady. I just thought it would have been nice if you had mentioned more about more clothes (especially she wearing old pantyhose :P ).

Also, please, if one, write a story like this about a man being transformed into a little girl, it would be amazing XD
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby Doctor Keith » Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:14 pm

A truly excellent story. Will we see more? I really want to know how the aging progresses. It takes a solid talent to put the reader into the mind of a character. You've demonstrated that talent over and over, and I want to experience it again! Very, very well done!
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby Beverly42 » Thu Sep 28, 2017 7:48 pm

I just want to add my voice to those who have said here that you are by far the best writer extant in this genre. Like them, I eagerly await the next chapter(s). Not trying to be a nag, but do you have a time frame in mind? None of us is getting any younger, especially Margaret (Sorry, couldn't resist). Thanks for all your fine work.
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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

Postby red_loves6 » Tue Oct 03, 2017 4:34 pm

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Re: Early Retirement (AP, WG)

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