I just ended up reading your story, it's amazing. I just love how you were able to develop such a deep and profound about theme. I love how the main character just starts to slowly accepting that she's now an old lady. I just thought it would have been nice if you had mentioned more about more clothes (especially she wearing old pantyhose
).
Also, please, if one, write a story like this about a man being transformed into a little girl, it would be amazing XD