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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby Sentinel » Mon Jun 10, 2019 4:28 pm

Yes I enjoyed that chapter. Poor candy's got mitzi and Rosa to worry about. Mitzi only has Rosa to worry about but doesn't know yet. Please keep it going
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby kleinerharlekin » Tue Jun 11, 2019 6:06 am

Maybe instead (or additional) to the electrolysis machine, maybe a little accident with depilatory creams /shampoos might do the trick for a mischief character like Rosa.
But I'm sure you'll find the right words and right ideas. The last entries of both Body Shaming and New Start were wonderful and whenever a new chapter is in sight, I'm really excited! Thanks for everything so far. :)
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby ssj3gohan007 » Tue Jun 11, 2019 6:54 am

Don't let it get you down, my friend. You're a great writer and you have a lot of people enjoying your work even if not all of them review or comment, that doesn't mean they don't like your story, just that they might not have an account, have problems logging in, didn't have enough time, or are just not the type of people who leave reviews. Even the best authors have had their setbacks, even bad reviews because you can't please everyone. The point is you shouldn't give up writing because I believe your way too gifted a storyteller to let your talents go to waste and it would be a darn shame for such brilliant works of art and masterpieces, if I do say so myself, to remain unfinished. Thank you for your hard work and keep writing :)
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby bozox » Tue Jun 11, 2019 7:55 am

Thanks ssj3gohan007, kleinerharlekin & Sentinel f
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby Tommmy » Tue Jun 11, 2019 9:03 pm

I do know others are reading it but I have not commented about it believe us, there are a lot of people who enjoy this story. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby Tommmy » Tue Jun 11, 2019 9:06 pm

Bozox, Judging by the Number of replies and the number of views, compared to other stories, body shaming is doing very very well.
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby Hopey » Wed Jun 12, 2019 7:57 pm

Can’t wait for the next chapter
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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 20 added on 6/9/19)

Postby bozox » Thu Jun 13, 2019 11:41 am

Thanks Hopey & Tommmy.
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Re: Body Shaming (replied to comments)

Postby bozox » Fri Jun 14, 2019 4:07 pm

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Re: Body Shaming (Chapter 21 added 6/14/19)

Postby ssj3gohan007 » Fri Jun 14, 2019 5:59 pm

Thank you for another amazing and super smoking hot chapter!! I love how Mitzi is working really hard to think up new and exciting ways to degrade Candy, especially looking forward to her efforts to sabotage Candy's chest and ultimately rid her of them. It will be ironic if freeing her of her chest will seem as if it was done out of a huge favor and great relief to Candy because of them being a massive burden on her. Though ultimately would regret forever losing her once best feature, and that it may have been wiser to diet and exercise, losing weight and building up muscles to help carry them, rather than the quick and easy, and yet more permanent, path. I also enjoyed seeing Mary again, and as always, she doesn't disappoint.

I also noticed how Mitzi almost lost her hair because of a 'misunderstanding' in the beginning, and I know that it was intentional. I am looking forward to what sneaky methods Rosa will try next! :)
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