Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby greinskyn » Sun Nov 05, 2017 5:35 pm

I thought you were heading for Lilith failing as Jimbo and Big Dani kept being content no matter what she threw their way.

But, I guess everyone reads things different.

Thanks for sharing
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Junketh71 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 6:03 pm

This was wonderful. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Junketh71 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 6:05 pm

This was a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it!
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby audipwr87 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:25 pm

greinskyn wrote:I thought you were heading for Lilith failing as Jimbo and Big Dani kept being content no matter what she threw their way.

But, I guess everyone reads things different.

Thanks for sharing


Well that's actually an idea that never crossed my mind. Possibly even a arch enemy to Lilith might pop up. Thanks for the idea!
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Pigs Brains » Mon Nov 06, 2017 7:50 am

Lilith has a lot of ambition , and thats good.
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Chopchop37920 » Mon Nov 06, 2017 9:54 am

You're a talented writer and I am looking forward to more lives being ruined by Lilith. ☺
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby greinskyn » Tue Nov 07, 2017 10:56 am

I love how a good story makes you think...

While thinking of different encounters Lilith could have, I got to wondering what made her the way she is? There is probably quite a back story.

Have you ever thought of her history? Or is she a mystery like The Man in Grey?

Again, many thanks!
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby audipwr87 » Tue Nov 07, 2017 4:22 pm

greinskyn wrote:I love how a good story makes you think...

While thinking of different encounters Lilith could have, I got to wondering what made her the way she is? There is probably quite a back story.

Have you ever thought of her history? Or is she a mystery like The Man in Grey?

Again, many thanks!


Thanks for the kind words Greinskyn! I have thought about her backstory a bit. I did however get my idea for Lilith thanks to the Mr. Grey character and Dictionary Rainbow with his non-descript character.

I thought of it as a way to pay tribute to those two characters who helped bring out my creative writing side.

But I must say good sir, a couple of my all time favorite stories are from you. They inspired me to write some of what I've wrote. I've always been a huge fan of reality altering stories. Profiler, Another Necklace and The Social Ladder are all stories that I've read probably a hundred times over and I'm not even exaggerating.
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Philbill » Tue Nov 07, 2017 5:50 pm

This story is great! Love the changes happening to every character nice work audipwr87

Could you link Proflier and Another Necklace? I don’t know if I have ever read those.
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Re: Dirty Laundry (wg, slob) **PART 3 ADDED**

Postby Chopchop37920 » Tue Nov 14, 2017 7:25 am

Ready for more!
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